I’ve posted this before but I’m still totally confused. I appreciate every ones input. I could really use it. Here’s what my story’s about, please don’t copy.
Sage was taken away from his family by scientists when he was 10. He was supposedly the most likely candidate for their experiment because he came from a line of psychics. It took 4 years of testing and monitoring to complete the procedure. Giving him the power where if he touches someone for too long the victim gasps in pain as their heart begins to prick with a shock that will stop the heart. Having succeeded they began training him to be the ultimate weapon, hoping to expand his powers over time. That is until Sage escaped a year later. Ever since then he’s been struggling with his new found talent that he refers to as a curse. Awhile after he escaped he was picked up by the police, for robbing a Quick Mark, and was placed in a foster home where they had 2 other kids of which they had adopted. It wasn’t long til he ended up in juvi. 4 years later, at 19 years of age, he was released. Sage’s foster parents thought they’d try a change of scenery. That’s where he meet Mallory. The one who cared enough to break down the walls.
I’m not sure if I want them to meet this way. Any ideas?
Also, should I make her gifted as well?
I’m not sure how to make this work or sound good.
He’s not still going to have foster parents at 19. Maybe have him save this Mallory sheila from being raped or mugged in order to meet her. If he moved to a low rent area on his release from juvi , that’d be a good place to come across a gang of baddies up to no good. Careful you don’t make the story too much like Dark Angel. Good luck.